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  1. Al Cyone says:

    Nice job.

    The only tweaking I’d do would be to drop the punctuation (the two periods), drop the “the” (before “sissies”), and change “sissies” to “wimps”. I think four mono-syllabic words (“It’s not for wimps”) pack a bit more punch. But, of course, it’s easier to be a critic than it is to be a writer.

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